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the shepherd’s hut

I’m noticing quite a few new visitors at the moment… hello and thank you for visiting!

This is a re-post of an earlier blog, but it feel particularly apt at the moment. Mr S and I are writing the screenplay for Mr R at the moment and we’ve been spending a lot of time with Curtis, who lives in a shepherd’s hut like the one below.

Earlier post on the editing of Mr R…

…When I was a small girl, from aged about nine, I used to help our neighbours by minding their sheep on the top of Okeford hill. Yes, really. My first job was as a shepherdess. The sheep belonged to Sarah, but at lambing time she needed help from her husband, David, who moonlighted from farming as a geography teacher in the local school. This meant that the lambs needed to be timed to start arriving at the very beginning of the Easter holidays. So, in years when Easter came near the start of March, it was very, very cold for the new lambs. We even had little orange lamb-macs for them.

But for us, David had a shepherd’s hut. It was just like the one in this picture, although I remember his being a rather handsome shade of blue. When it got too cold out on the hillside, we would retreat into the hut and light the stove. Some of my happiest memories are of huddling around that wood-burner, listening to the wind howl across the hill and thrum against the tin roof.

It's rather cosy, isn't it?

It's rather cosy, isn't it?

I e-mailed the latest revision of Mr R to Jocasta today. There were no big changes really to this draft. A few prudent cuts. A bit like the budlia and fuchsias that Collin has been pruning in the garden. But it’s off to the copy editor now. (The m/s not the fuchsia, as that would be silly). I’ll get it back from the copy editor in a couple of weeks and then onto the final polishes.

Mr S and I are off to NYC next week, and then onto LA for a month after that. It will be a pleasant mixture of business and holiday, and I will keep blogging as I go.

I love the ladies of the W.I.

Mr S and I are just back from the West Meon Book Festival – a 3 day celebration of writers and writing held in the heart of the Hampshire countryside. The event for Mr R was absolutely gorgeous. The fabulous ladies of the West Meon W.I. scoured the book for recipes and created a vintage 50s tea. They concocted their own (delicious) version of Baumtorte, stashed cupcakes on a 50s cake stand and made triangle sandwiches — cucumber and also ‘fish-paste’ which apparently was very authentic. They even donned 50s style hats and aprons. I was quite awed by their efforts.

note the fantastic 50s headwear

The village hall was decked out with bunting, gingham table cloths while sweet-peas from the garden were placed upon each table. I can’t imagine giving a talk in a more lovely place to more enthusiastic people.

and another hat, I'd like to steal...

Earlier, I listened to Jane Gardam discuss ‘Old Filth’ and ‘The Man in the Wooden Hat’ in the village church. She described how her character Edward Feathers, appeared to her one day, fully formed like a man from a dream. I love hearing how other writers discover their characters. It took me several drafts to really know Jack Rosenblum. He was called Sam for a while and I think that was part of the problem — he had the wrong name. Yet, Elise Landau, the heroine in ‘The Novel in the Viola’ appeared in my life quite suddenly and looked me straight in the eye, most determined to tell her story.

West Meon Church -- may there be bunting every day

mountains and molehills

Me on a molehill

Me on a molehill

This is an old post for any of you getting de ja vu. However, it raises (if you’ll excuse the pun) some interesting ideas about molehills.

(April 2009)

So, I’ve started the edit. My two wonderful editors had great notes. However, they did bring up one contentious point – the size of molehills. Molehills and, more specifically, their removal are very important to the novel. And the question was raised – actually how big is a molehill? For all you city-dwellers, here is crucial information about molehills…

Fresh molehills are small heaps of earth several inches high and a foot or so across. However, an established mole field is another story. In time, without being smoothed, molehills grow into miniature mole-mountains. They can be two feet tall and several feet across. Over many years, these grassy mounds can cover an entire field. Preventing a little molehill from sprouting into a mole-mountain and spoiling a field is hard work. Moles fixate my parents. They’ve tried every kind of anti-mole device – from widgets buried underground that are supposed to give moles headaches to traps. My father’s morning ritual, is to check the mole traps…

I’ve posted a photo of a molehill, with me on top for scale. This is one of the SMALLER molehills in the field this morning. The largest ones are nearly twice its size. All I can say to the cynics is that Dorset moles must be more vicious than other moles. They drink more cider.